I can't help but ponder. But it is another great piece if I say so myself. I like how the "orangish" lighting of the rising or setting sun slowly fading into the star-filled night. But what got me more was the subtle blue hue radiating around Luna. It was a nice approach I must say. I'm no artist at any form, but expressionism does speak for itself.
I don't speak English, so my "best" is often not enough when writing stories. Yeah, lot of people can see pass that and enjoy the story anyway. However, that's not the case for everybody, and some block when they encounter bad grammar or sentences that are not structurally well in English. I understand that, and it's why I'm happy - and lucky - to now have two pre-reader who are very good in this kind of things. The next story should be relatively error free.