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:iconjacob134:
jacob134 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015
Cool story bro. Very emotional.  Here, have a single manly tear.
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tomytieneblas74 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
wait, I don't think ive seen this, my bad.
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Blackheart010 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This really touched my heart. I can't stop tearing up from how emotional this is man. Respect bro
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commando5017 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Bear Emoji-33 (Sad) [V2] I love it! still though... I wished that the whole season 5 thing never happened. 
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CharlieIndigoalpha76 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Why didn't you do this comic like the other ones, because i got the first five and I want to look at this comic without using Microsoft word.
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I mentioned on my deviation comment that If you can't see this version, you can see this other version on my blog raikoh14.tumblr.com/post/57430…
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CharlieIndigoalpha76 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah but I got the others and I want to see them all one time instead of using Microsoft word to see the last page of it.
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Shawn1968 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
I love this story. When I first saw your Barrissoka artwork I saw a story in it that could have been right there in the Clone Wars series right under our noses. Thinking back to the episodes makes you wonder if it was. Your art also inspired me to start writing a short story about this very subject, but you beat me to it. Cudos. A excellent story and,as usual,artwork to match.
Wonderful.
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ATTMUD24PL Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
You should work for the Dave Filoni. It was...amazing and touching.
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Amaris-the-Demon Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrlytearplz: That was the most beautiful thing I have ever seen 
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WarnerRepublic Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now our hearts can heal thanks to your support and love for Ahsoka and Barriss's friendship. This story has repaired the damage and lighten the darkness Lucas and Filoni has caused since last February and March. Now Ahsoka and Barriss can be together without the Separatists, the Sith, or the Clone Wars interfering with them. Thank you Raikoh. We can rest more easy now. ;D
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svfd258 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Incredible short story I see that even though she left the order she still has the compassion and sincerity to forgive barriss it shows maturity
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:iconwhitecattheheroqueen:
That was amazing! Coincidentally, White Cat once said a similar thing.
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RommieSG Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful story.
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THEWULFMAN Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love your Barrisoka as always. 

:star::star::star::star:/5 

One short because I missed your beautiful colors in this.
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 hey, I haven't seen you in a while around here. well thank you, I chose to do this in monochrome because I wanted to make it feel like a manga, plus it helped me save more time to make this.
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THEWULFMAN Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I understand why. Coloring takes a lot of time for a whole comic. :)


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Wisky-08 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
Love it!!!
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JediKnight15 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome ending!
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Simati Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice conclusion ! :D
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:iconpronker:
pronker Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excellent movement, both the art and the moods - wow!
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! 
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Twazzi Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.... Clap  In my opinion, this is your best work Raikoh.
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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Jowain92 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:clap:
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starwars13286 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
These two are the female Anakin and Obi-Wan, the best of friends ^^
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, you are right now that you mention it, Ahsoka is Obi Wan and Barriss is Anakin
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Leafstem Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Honestly, this is so touching, it almost made me cry. :happycry: This is how the episode should have ended.
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Leafstem Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, I don't support slash, but I am such a sucker for family relationships, such as the sisterly one you gave Barriss and Ahsoka in this. :) Great job!
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's cool,  I respect your opinions and anybody else's in regards to slash. At least I'm glad to hear you liked this story.
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evangelian007 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Words cannot describe how beautiful this is. I was surprisingly afraid that since the comic is short that the ending wouldn't be satisfying yet you managed to prove me wrong. And I'm very happy for it.

I really have to praise you yet again for the way you drew it. I know I've said this a lot of times but the way you gave detail to Barriss and Ahsoka is mind blowing. You captured her emotions perfectly.

I do not know why but Barriss looks strangely both physically and emotionally beautiful. The way her body is wet it makes her look angelic.  And it's weird because she did very deplorable things. She's filled with so many sins and yet Ahsoka accepted her and forgave her. I guess Ahsoka saw in her her beauty.

I also really loved when she started to cry in Ahsoka's comfort. Finally letting all the sadness and pain she bottled out. And I also love when she apologized. Well more how she did it. 

When she said "I never wished for the things that happened happen. But they did, and they forced me to do things I didn't wanted, especially to you! I was so afraid" my 1st thought that came to my mind was not that Palpatine was controlling her but that her fears, her anger, her despair motivated her to do those things. Or to be more specific the dark side. 

And maybe the war it took a toll on Barriss's mind. she reminds me a lot of Luna(from the fist 2 episodes of FiM) and Fluttershy(putting your hoof down). They both bottled up their anger and resentment until it got the better of them.

And I really love the ending. It's so conclusive. That finally after all the hardships they both had to endure and the betrayals(both by the Jedi and the Sith) they had to suffer and stomach through they can finally be at peace and serenity(Well according to this fan comic).

I believe that this song might be fitting for it(even though I admit that the star stealing girl song from the Chrono Cross ost is fitting too). www.youtube.com/watch?v=TWZQqg…
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A very thoughtful comment, and I thank you so much for it, it means so much for me to see many others enjoying my first ever try at making a serious comic. I'm no expert comic maker, but making this has given me tremendous new knowledge of what it is to make comics with a story. 
And that's a great song you linked too, very beautiful.
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist
wow, just wow!
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classicforce Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
THE FEELS.
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JasonRyder Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
This is so true to canon and well executed! According to Star Wars Insider, Ahsoka left the Jedi Order because she couldn't deny what Barriss said was true. I believed that Darth Sidious has plans for Barriss since he vaguely said, "Take her away". Also had a theory that she and Darth Maul would meet and become his new apprentice. Doubt that will happen since she knows Maul is a darksider and she claimed she planned the bombing to show that the Jedi and Republic only really believed in violence now. She wouldn't willingly serve the Seperatists or the Sith since they are pawns of the dark side just as the Republic and Jedi are. The website even says everything Barriss said is 100% true.

Another thing I thought would happen is Ventress, for her help in uncovering the truth behind the attack on the Temple, would be pardoned like Ahsoka promised and possibly even given an offer to rejoin(or officially join) the Order her Master, Ky Narec, once served.
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ssgtsplatter Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
I don't know if it's because I'm on an iPad or what but I can't see the final comic. I'll try again tomorrow on my laptop.
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you can't see it, then try this alternative site where I also uploaded it raikoh14.tumblr.com/post/57430…
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ssgtsplatter Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Thank you raikoh. The link worked.
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Also great ending to the comic.
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Codeismynickname Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
MUST...NOT...CRY...AH I CAN'T! :'(

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greivergf Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
This is how the clones wars should have ended.
I love your comic I have just finished reading all of the story and congrats on such lovely ending.
I would love to see this in colour,but that mite ruin the atmosphere of the comic.
I would love to see you do a prequal on how ahsoka got her scar and who has been helping her(Lux,Assaji or someone else?)
I wonder if you are making an orginal comic with all the great works of art that you have.(Far better than more comic makers)
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iSqarks Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful end to a fantastic story! If only the writers of the show could have come up with something like this, absolutely perfect!
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imdagiver Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
This is a silly question but what was the thing that Ahsoka gave to Barriss? It looked like a bar of soap... :P
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's a belt buckle that Barriss used to wear before, which has the shape of a heart, and Ahsoka has been wearing it, so now she is giving it back to her.
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kuroi-getsuga Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
how clone wars should have ended...'nuff said
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Rook40 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Your AhsokaxBarriss art is by far your strongest work I think. Keep up the great work 
(I mean, supposing there will be more of AhsokaxBarriss. I'd hate to see that go)
Love the ending(?) for this man! Very emotional...
Hug 
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Raikoh-illust Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks very much, and I do intend to continue making more AhsokaxBarriss pictures, it's what I love to do the most.
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Jsayah Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Wow this is good.
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JediKnight15 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome ending!! Thanks man!:happybounce: 
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PG13inthehouse Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I applaud you, my friend!:clap: 
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psychotol Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Nice work
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